sneak peek into a story I started a while back.

I go in moods with writing and not writing.  And today I feel like it.  As it goes, I’ll be writing in my “story” some more, maybe even finish it someday in the future sometime.  I probably only have about a third of it left to write, as I’m guessing.
It’s kind of a medievalesque fantasy story for the sake of entertainment, I suppose.  But I do try to throw in good morals in where I can.  Meanwhile, here’s a short bit about one of the characters.

Sneak peek: Raak
Raak is about average in height, but he is strong and well built.  His hair is brown, and well kept.  He keeps his face shaved clean if he can.  But most strikingly are his eyes. Under his thick, black eyebrows, his sharp eyes seem to cut through anything he looks at.  His authority lies thick in the air about him.  Yet he is quite kind in manner.
He serves under the king of Arnamad as the Captain of the Guard in the capital city of Stonewell.  He began under the current king’s father, but through an unfortunate turn of events in the last few years, the former king left the throne open to his son by inheritance.  He maintained his position in Arnamad since the king saw no reason to replace one of his best men.  His loyalty in service to protect the king and keep peace in the city is unmatched.  As a detective, he has rooted out some of the most dangerous criminals out of the land.  But when danger is too high, he is not afraid to use force.  He doesn’t let nonsense get in the way of his job.  His courage is far above most mortal men by far, which makes his foes tremble and doubt if he is even a man.  Also his skill with a sword and military tactics are almost unmatched by any other.  He has stood up to beasts and monsters worse than even nightmares could imagine.
Under his command is the guard of Stonewell, split into various groupings according to their uses (such as bowmen, swordsmen, and spearmen).  Most of the business he does is in Stonewell, but when nobles travel, he often provides protection for them.